Wednesday, September 13, 2017

A Reader Asks... Is the Writing Critical

A LYS District Curriculum Specialist asks the following:

SC,

My colleague and I have both heard you speak and have read your explanation for determining if students are writing critically. We have reached two different conclusions. She still thinks most writing in ELAR is not critical. She refers to it as mostly free writing. 

But my take is that it depends on the task.  Now, I am not an ELAR specialist, so I am a little confused at what a free write is exactly.  If a student is given a task or prompt where they have to do a mind map, a thought process of how their own experiences relate to the task or prompt, connect their thoughts into writing and then they revise (usually through reflection with self and peers) then this type of task could be critical.  I hate to keep asking the same questions, I am just seeking clarification.

SC Response
I’m not surprised that this pursuit has led to some debate.  We too find ourselves debating when is a writing task critical and when is it not. To answer definitively, I would have to see the prompt.  Without seeing the prompt, I would venture to say that you are both probably right.  

Most writing in ELAR is not critical writing.  It is just getting words on paper.  A lot of warm-up and journal writing would fall in this category.  Along with the all too common, “Write about what you did for Spring Break” writing assignments, which are really just extended time fillers.  

Which is why you have to look at the prompt and determine: 

1. Does it force a connection between the content (taught today) and something else?
2. Does it force the student to think at the application level of cognition or higher?

If the answer to either of these questions is “no,” it is safe to assume that the writing will not be critical.  If the answer to both questions is “yes,” move to the next set of "look for’s."

You then have to look at what the students are writing and determine:

1. Are the students making some connection(s)?
2. Does the writing indicate thinking at the application level or higher?

If no, the writing is probably not critical.  If yes, you have a Critical Writing winner.

Finally, I will admit that the final test is your gut.  Throw the rules aside and just look. Everything may look wrong and your gut will tell you that it is critical writing, and vice-versa.  Trust your gut and then develop the vocabulary to explain why your gut is right.
   
Think. Work. Achieve.

Your turn...

















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Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Use Last Year's Data to Drive the First Month of School

For some of you this may be a little late, but the start of this school year has been unique, to say the least.  Because of this, there is little time to ease into instruction.  From now to Christmas Break, we need to be operating at a full sprint. With that in mind here are two suggestions that will allow teachers to review and reteach critical concepts while moving forward with this year’s curriculum.

1. Take a look at the related course End of Year Exam or final that the students took last year.  Identify the three or four concepts that the class, as a whole, did the worst on.  Then for the first three to four weeks of the school year, purposefully review, reteach and practice those concepts during the warm-up, every class, every day.  By the end of four weeks, teachers have provided 100 minutes of focused review while teaching a month of this year’s curriculum.  That is a win for everyone: students, teachers, and the school as a whole.

2. Again, take a look at the related course End of Year Exam or final that the students took last year.  Also look at their final grade in the course.  Any student that did not meet the passing standard for the exams or the course, should be referred to tutoring, starting the first week of school.  These are the students at greatest risk of failing this year and we all know that regression over the summer is a given. So, don’t wait.  Provide these students extra support, now.  To wait isn’t being prudent, it actually borders on professional malpractice.

Think. Work. Achieve.

Your turn...


Monday, September 11, 2017

Top Tweets from the Week of September 3, 2017

If you are not following @LYSNation on Twitter, then you missed the Top 10 LYS Tweets from the week of September 3, 2017 when they were first posted.  And if you are on Twitter, you might want to check out the Tweeters who made this week’s list.

1. This quote sits on my mind today: "My whole career has been about 'You can't do that,' and guess what: I did that!" -E. Don Brown (By @jackson_carrie)

2. Congratulations to LYSer, Becky Flynn! She is the new Assistant Principal at Roosevelt Middle School in OCPS!! Who will be next? (By @LYSNation)

3. For elected officials to treat teachers as threats rather than heroes is an astonishing affront to civil society. (By @pastors4txkids)

4. Texas Senate to Texas House: "We will starve your schools until you let us privatize them." (By @pastors4txkids)

5. Some kids go an entire day without anyone saying their name. Be the teacher who speaks to each student by name every day. (By @justintarte)

6. School leaders must consider the instructional cost of any activity. (By @SRead806)

7. Don't be afraid to take the road less traveled on. LEAD your school! (By @Crysrommuel)

8. Research: "Homework in elementary school does not contribute to academic achievement," but daily reading does. (By @DanielPink)

9. Prison is an expensive way of making bad people worse. (By @TheEconomist)

10. I am confident my students will perform much better after I read your book: The Fundamental 5 (Cain & Laird). Excellent book!!!!! (By @michaelwillis08)

Think. Work. Achieve.

Your turn...


  • Call Jo at (832) 477-LEAD to order your campus set of “The Fundamental 5: The Formula for Quality Instruction.” Individual copies available on Amazon.com!  http://tinyurl.com/Fundamental5 
  • Upcoming Conference Presentations: The Fundamental 5 National Summit (Keynote) 
  • Now at the Apple App Store: Fun 5 Timer (Fundamental 5 Delivery Tool); PowerWalks CLC (Networked Formative Observation Tool) 
  • Follow Sean Cain and LYS on www.Twitter.com/LYSNation  and like Lead Your School on Facebook